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XaZnX07
post Aug 4 2004, 01:50 PM
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what do you think of this poem i wrote for this special person


TODAY I SAW A GIRL WOW SHE IS BEAUTIFUL I GOT TO KNOW HER NAME AND WE BECAME GOOD FRIENDS BUT ....

SOMETHING HAPPEN .....



BEAUTIFUL I SAW U TODAY I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU ... I WAS JUST THINKING AT THAT MOMENT I WANTED TO SAY HI TO U BUT SOMETHING MADE ME BACK OFF

BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY JUST AS BEFORE, STANDING NEXT TO YOU THINKING BOY I WISH I COULD HOLD YOUR HAND

BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY AGAIN. I WAS STANDING NEXT TO YOU YET IT FELT LIKE I WAS A BILLION MILES AWAY FROM YOU, WISHING I COULD JUST GRAB YOU AND HOLD YOU TIGHT IN MY ARMS

BEAUTIFUL I SAW YOU TODAY BUT THIS TIME I FELT LIKE I JUST WANTED TO KISS YOU AND HOLD YOU FOR EVA IN MY ARMS

BEAUTIFUL TODAY I SAW YOU AGAIN LOOKING BEAUTIFUL THAN EVA LIKE YOU ALWAYS DO, TODAY IS DIFFERENT SOMETHING SO SPECIAL I THOUGHT I COULDNT OF KNOWN WHAT IT IS AT THIS YOUNG AGE BUT I CAME REALIZE I WANTED TO LET YOU KNOW THAT I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU

NOT A DAY THAT PAST THAT I DONT LOOK AT YOUR BEAUTIFUL FACE OR HEAR YOUR SWEET VOICE

EVERY DAY THAT PAST MY LOVE FOR YOU GROWS AND GROWS AND MY LOVE FOR YOU BEAUTIFUL WILL NEVA STOP GROWING

YOU HAVE TRIPED ME AND I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU GIRL





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XaZnX07   what do you think.......   Aug 4 2004, 01:50 PM
seriouslynikki   wow! Very nice!   Aug 4 2004, 02:12 PM
sheepy   very unique nd nice !   Aug 7 2004, 12:14 PM
islandkiss   aww that's adorable.   Sep 3 2004, 10:52 AM
sugarcultluver   wow thats really good!   Sep 3 2004, 01:41 PM
F1R3B4T   lol nice.... ehh does it have to be in caps tho?   Sep 3 2004, 02:47 PM


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