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my poem
yamamoto
post May 25 2007, 06:37 PM
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Hi!

Long time poet, first-time poster. Kinda shy, but here's my poem. Constructive criticism welcome.


Black cock . .
White ass--
y they no use plaxiglass?



(I have a few more stanzas, but they're still in the rough draft stage.)

Thanks in advance for any comment.

Ok . . Bye!
 

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yamamoto   my poem   May 25 2007, 06:37 PM


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