Just a poem-ishy thing., Yup ishness. |
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Just a poem-ishy thing., Yup ishness. |
Aug 28 2004, 09:11 PM
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Here's this poem I wrote a few days ago, out of the 15 poems, I adores this one the most. So I thought I'd share it with Createblog, it's a bit long I think, I hope you like.
So here it is the sweet catastrophe, I know it's happened because you're with me, my heart skips a beat, and then I melt with the feeling of defeat, I know I'm safest in your arms, you protect me from all the harm, So here it is sweet catastrophe, you let me go so I could be free, but I'm always stuck like glue, as I'm always wanting you, this may be my sweet, unjust doom, lock me up in my dark, padded room, So here it is sweet catastrophe, I can't deny what you say to me, these words from your lips, always make my heart do flips, what's happening, do you see?, as all I want is for you to be with me, So here it is sweet catastrophe, the shattered pieces of me, I watch as you patch them back, now I know you are what I lack, my heart is fixed and I'm complete, but you know this can all be gone from a simple delete, So it is sweet catastrophe, I know you'll always be with me, walking down the streets of this fall day, I see your face and you say "hey" so again we meet and it's the only way, that now I know that I just have to stay, you take my hand and we walk away, and I tell you I'll love you forever and a day. |
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Aug 28 2004, 10:51 PM
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Nice
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Aug 31 2004, 02:16 PM
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i'm susan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
awww this is a good poem here!! it's almost sounds like a lyric too! you should make it out of a lyric hehe like put a chorus in the middle if you can^^;; i'm just saying that this poem is reallie good and adorable! keep it up!
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