my poem, im 14 dont laugh! |
 Aug 21 2004, 01:59 AM
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 im making a come back! woohoo  Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,819  |
my poem is gonna be a short one....
i thought you were the one but i guess i was wrong i loved u with my heart but u didnt love me at all i thought we were lovers like all of them there but all u could say was "dont touch my hair!" despite all the bickering, i still love you so please dont ever leave me as i need u so if you hate me that much u might as well kill me because without you in my life im nothing but an ant i noe its supposed to have stanzas and stuff but i was lazy... this is just a short one... it was impromptu too!!! |
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Aug 22 2004, 02:34 AM
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I C DEAD PEOPLE Group: Member Posts: 728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 36,002 |
thats really good
i like that |
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Aug 23 2004, 10:20 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 5,585 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,082 |
Lol, you write better poems that I do when I was 14. >.< I suck at rhyming. It amazes me how people can come up with words easily.
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Aug 24 2004, 02:35 AM
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im making a come back! woohoo Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,819 |
well according to iq tests i have a good intelectual understanding.... means im good at words... so yeah its easy for me!!
and thanx! 
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Aug 24 2004, 05:44 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 137 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,438 |
nice
but y an ant? not a smant? not a pant? not a not? not a ... umm ran out |
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Aug 25 2004, 02:04 AM
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im making a come back! woohoo Group: Member Posts: 395 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,819 |
QUOTE(sugarcubes @ Aug 24 2004, 5:44 PM) nice but y an ant? not a smant? not a pant? not a not? not a ... umm ran out LOL.... funny! hahahahahahaha.... cuz i dun wanna me smants or pants 
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