One of my new poems, tell me what you thinnk :) Options

[Heathasm]

I melted his rounds into metallic fists
“My brother shot me in an act;
Can’t you see my heart-
How that calvary made it bleed”

A choppy melody vibrates them,
Easing them out with the pain of your trysts…
‘I’m gonna earn your lovin’;
Watch you caress and kiss,
“No, this isn’t different”
"Watching is just as arousing",
Even though, I’m thinking bad
'can't take much more of this'
But, I’m gonna watch you,
I'm gonna watch you darlin’

I’m gonna watch you, darlin’
You always seemed to like it
When eyes should amble your way
I just never fathomed you’d take it
So, I wish you’d reminisce
In the fact that I’d never of asked you to stay
Reminisce in my silence
An always know, my darling

But, can you look at my heart;
...Could you ever see,
You breaking this glass house—
How my heart was also for me’