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not my poem, but tell me what u think of it
lhuvhurts
post Aug 22 2004, 02:47 AM
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i didnt make this poem up my sister did and i just want to know why u people thing of it..please be honest
note my sister is only 11 years old

i loved u
i trusted u
i did everything with u
i never wanted u and me to b ova
but the day had to cum
and now its ova.
my hart will be broken 4 eva
and the only one to fix it is U..
 
 
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angel-roh
post Aug 23 2004, 12:46 AM
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omg ur sister made a terrific poem!! it's reallie cute!! aww i like the last line!! it's only u who have to repair my heart...omg that's sooo me right now aww^^ thx for sharing cause i reallie love it^^
 
sweetdreamsx3
post Aug 23 2004, 10:21 PM
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QUOTE(lhuvhurts @ Aug 22 2004, 2:47 AM)
note my sister is only 11 years old

Wow, that's truly shocking. Lol. >.< The best poem I've written was probably when I was in....7th grade? or 8th?
 

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