looking back, little (bad) poem for you guys... |
looking back, little (bad) poem for you guys... |
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![]() the chick with rainbow hair ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 19 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,484 ![]() |
looking back, every so often
i can trace the scar you left on me i can touch the whole where your soul once lived in mine i remember the nights of chasing sleep reaching into darkness to chase away the mirage of your face i remember the salty tears as i packed away all my treasures wishing i could pack away the memories into a box and leave it locked i remember the anniversaries the nights i couldnt have gotten through with you and the nights i barely got through without you i remember hearing your happiness while i was wandering lost under my raincloud of melancholy now i look back i remember everything... and i wouldnt give it up for anything ah gosh...this has to be one of the worst things ive written in awhile..but i just found the writing section (yeah im a little slow haha. and i havnt been on in awhile) so i felt the urge to spit something out...And i do plan on adding on to this, i know the middle needs more....but please feel free to critique it! Just dont be sh**ty about it ![]() |
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