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looking back, little (bad) poem for you guys...
needlenymph
post Sep 18 2004, 08:08 PM
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looking back, every so often
i can trace the scar you left on me
i can touch the whole where your soul once lived in mine

i remember the nights
of chasing sleep
reaching into darkness
to chase away the mirage of your face

i remember the salty tears
as i packed away all my treasures
wishing i could pack away the memories
into a box and leave it locked

i remember the anniversaries
the nights i couldnt have gotten through with you
and the nights i barely got through without you

i remember hearing your happiness
while i was wandering lost
under my raincloud of melancholy

now i look back
i remember everything...
and i wouldnt give it up for anything






ah gosh...this has to be one of the worst things ive written in awhile..but i just found the writing section (yeah im a little slow haha. and i havnt been on in awhile) so i felt the urge to spit something out...And i do plan on adding on to this, i know the middle needs more....but please feel free to critique it! Just dont be sh**ty about it biggrin.gif
 

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needlenymph   looking back   Sep 18 2004, 08:08 PM


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