not a story, but..., i'd appreciate it if u read this :) |
not a story, but..., i'd appreciate it if u read this :) |
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Okay, if you've read part of my book Flashbacks then you know I really like to write. So I'm almost done with Flashbacks (it's 215 pages now) so I'm thinking of a new story. I want to know what you'd rather read...(NOTE: both of these plots are basically based on a true story)
Story #1- A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out. That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.) Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her. That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.) So what do you guys think? |
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