You, poem i deticate 2 someone in my life |
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 Aug 4 2004, 02:33 AM
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 Future Mr. Kelly Clarkson  Group: Member Posts: 1,268 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,552  |
a poem i wrote 4 someone, wat do u think? be as honest as u want, i dont really care
You by kantoaznboi Your voice, I crave to hear it One more time, My heart, Yearns for you In my arms, My Soul Rejoices each time When we talk, You have become My ecstasy, High on the joy You give me Each and everyday, And my life Didn’t seem so Dark and desolate, With you Brightening my world, Each day Immersed with happiness, But my heart shattered, Like a piece of glass Dropping to the ground, When u told me You didn’t feel the same. I lost all hope That we would ever be, Wishing, Hoping, Longing, For just one moment With you in my arms, Making you feel safe, And protected From the harsh world. I would wait for eternity Cause you are worth Each minute, Hour, Day, Year, Till I can Call you my boo, But my fear Consumes me, Preventing me from waiting, I think I’ll lose you And be heartbroken Once again, Taking me back To my own Abyss of sorrow You will always Be in my heart, You inspired me, And you lifted my world, I only hope I had that effect, On you. |
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Aug 4 2004, 05:10 AM
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 :hammer: Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,849 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,700 |
*snaps fingers*
Nice, I think it'd make that special someone feel special 
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Aug 4 2004, 09:41 AM
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Wow, I love it! Sounds like the story of my life.....
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Aug 4 2004, 01:43 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
i love this poem. its like how my life is and how i feel. I wanted that special someone to feel the same, but he broke my heart and told me he didnt feel the same. i LOVE this poem!
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Aug 4 2004, 03:18 PM
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 Look its... Group: Official Member Posts: 5,817 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,767 |
aww. thats sweet brandon. i like it. it has a flow and dont go off track. the sad part is i dont know some words you used. my english is bad >.<
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Aug 4 2004, 05:59 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
^ yeah me too. my small range of vocab is poopie. lols i still like it a lot tho !
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Aug 5 2004, 08:33 PM
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 I HAVE YOUR IP Group: Member Posts: 1,429 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,745 |
Good stuff brandon....uhm seems like somthing i would write back when i was with my ex.
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Aug 5 2004, 08:34 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 646 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,847 |
very very cool brandon =D
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Aug 5 2004, 08:43 PM
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 He ate it, I swear! Group: Member Posts: 659 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,075 |
Awww... That's good, Brandon. There's one part that made me laugh. "Call you my boo" Lol. Lo siento. I don't mean to make fun of it or anything but I just laugh when people call each other "boo." Anyway, g'job Brandon! =DD
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Aug 6 2004, 12:04 AM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
Awesome ... very deep `nd if some guy wrote that for me I'd be really happy
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