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 Jul 31 2004, 05:15 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Okay, I really tried to write a happy poem for my suggestions thing. Just couldn't do it. Tried so hard. I came up with something err....that's this...
Gone By: Savannah Do you hear me calling you? Our bodies surrounded by this cursed hue. My voice has become weak, As I find those dead in heap after endless heap. Are you going to find me? Can we work this out and truly be? I don't want to live just to die, I want to know that you are really mine. So now I'll sit and close my eyes, Wish it all away; pretend it's one big lie. I'm so lost now that you're gone, I'm so alone, and the music ends; taking away song. I've lost what's so needed in my life, It's all been cut down with a rusty, jagged knife. I'm losing all my sense of time, In the end love and life are one big rhyme. |
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Jul 31 2004, 05:21 PM
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 3,565, you n00bs ain't got nothin' on me. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,761 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,565 |
Love and life are one big rhyme.
I love that.I swear, you are the best writer in createBlog. |
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Jul 31 2004, 05:45 PM
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Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
QUOTE(juliar @ Jul 31 2004, 5:21 PM) Love and life are one big rhyme. I love that.I swear, you are the best writer in createBlog. Heh! Thank you! I wish I was the best writer in cB, but thanks so much for the compliment ^^ |
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