Alone, A poem i wrote.... |
Alone, A poem i wrote.... |
Jul 26 2004, 04:06 PM
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Alone.
Always Alone. Doesn't get angry. Or sad. Or happy. Just sits there. Maybe thinking. Maybe Lost in another world. But never in reality. Doesn't look. But always sees. Never misses a thing. Full of secrets. Doesn't talk. Doesn't confide. So full of secrets. Made fun of. But doesn't care. People ask. People say. People command. But doesn't answer. Quiet. Desolate. Emotionless. Nothing is ever said. But there's a connection. They criticize. They point. They shout. But never answers. Things happen. Doesn't look. But always sees. Never misses a thing. |
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curi0usbr0wneyes Alone Jul 26 2004, 04:06 PM
vietspirit cool poem. you got talent. Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
inquisitive_ That's a pretty good poem. I like! Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
curi0usbr0wneyes thanx! Jul 26 2004, 04:15 PM
Foolish Heart I get the point of your story, i love it. Good job... Jul 28 2004, 05:44 AM
xtremeliquid Nice. Jul 28 2004, 09:14 AM
seriouslynikki man...ur very talented. I love this poem because i... Jul 28 2004, 01:10 PM
curi0usbr0wneyes i thought that i was the only one who felt this wa... Jul 28 2004, 09:24 PM
chica777708 I love it, it relates to me to I always think I am... Jul 28 2004, 09:49 PM
curi0usbr0wneyes Thanx! Jul 29 2004, 01:32 PM
Devastation QUOTE(curi0usbr0wneyes @ Jul 29 2004, 1:32 PM... Jul 29 2004, 01:42 PM
01-supergirl Wow. thats a nice poem...nice work =) Jul 29 2004, 02:30 PM
curi0usbr0wneyes thanx! Jul 29 2004, 06:53 PM
Hells_Ice i likeey! Jul 30 2004, 11:00 AM
emptyminded I feel with that poem. You are really talented. Jul 30 2004, 12:11 PM
curi0usbr0wneyes WOW! thanks! Jul 30 2004, 12:34 PM![]() ![]() |