All For You, <3 |
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 Jul 29 2004, 01:08 AM
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 Aww! ^___^  Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645  |
All For You, by Me
A sparkle of my sorrow Drips in this shattered memory These broken promises you made Made my heart bleed eternally This love is a never ending story A maze you have to walk through Silent screams inside my head I wish you could just be true Take my hand and don't let go Make this moment last forever Taking in all this pain for you Why can't we just stay together? It's a poem I wrote yesterday. It's not really dedicated to anybody but yeah. Sometimes that's how I feel. Comments would be great and appreciated. -hEaRt <3 |
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Jul 29 2004, 01:23 AM
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I like it... Great job hun
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Jul 29 2004, 01:24 AM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
QUOTE(eboarder2020 @ Jul 29 2004, 1:23 AM) I like it... Great job hun Thanks!! I thought no one would like it!! -hEaRt <3 |
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Jul 29 2004, 01:30 AM
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 - wanker. Group: Member Posts: 199 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,490 |
i like it too.
 good job
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Jul 29 2004, 01:31 AM
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I like it too
It sounds like it could be a song... |
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Jul 29 2004, 01:33 AM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Aww thanks you guys! ^-^
-hEaRt <3 |
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Jul 29 2004, 12:24 PM
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 Roses are red so r my cheeks! Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,115 |
good job
 I liked it
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Jul 30 2004, 05:57 PM
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Aww! ^___^ Group: Member Posts: 184 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,645 |
Thanks ^-^
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