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QuixotikChic
post Jul 29 2004, 07:39 PM
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His soulful rhythmic rhymes put me in a heavy trance
Falling to his sultry voice, While all night long I glance
into his deep brown eyes and boyish grin
As he entrances me lyrically and my heart pounds within
I keep telling myself that this infatuation has no meaning
that it's nothing more than physical but emotionally I'm feeling
like I'm floating on "cloud 9" lost in all the dreaming
WHile I'm thinking of him
and how he effects me,
How he makes me
see more clearly
But that is all it will ever be
a secret hidden in forgotten memories
The fear of rejection to hard to overcome
Knowing that this could change everything
Just knowing that he might be the one
To be the first to break my heart.
I smile innocently at him but within I know its hard
hearing his voice
seeing him laugh
Those are the memories I wish I could take back
His soulful rhythmic rhymes still put me in a heavy trance
I fall to his voice, but all I can do is glance
into his deep brown eyes and boyish grin
as he entrances me lyrically and my heart pounds within.
 
curi0usbr0wneyes
post Jul 29 2004, 08:31 PM
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your poems are reallly cool! i esp. love this poem 'cause of the meaning and emotion put into it.
 
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post Jul 31 2004, 01:31 AM
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thanks..yeah its different. cause i dont usually write about love..
 

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