poem, about my bf (well X now) |
 Jul 28 2004, 09:07 PM
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 Roses are red so r my cheeks!  Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,115  |
I am not really a poet but I was having feelings, and I tried to turn it into a poem so here it goes:
I think about you I dream about you What do you do? When I am with you, I am Happy and having fun. When I am not with you, I am sad and want to run. I would kiss you But, I dont want to miss you. would you break my heart? I cant even imagion that, oh and do u think I am fat? Would you be truthfull and say, what you dont like about me? Then set me free? Do you just luv me or, Do you love me like a fat kid loves cake? yah not really a big deal but w/e its my first poem ever sorri if u hate it 
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chica777708 poem Jul 28 2004, 09:07 PM
Foolish Heart Aww it's not that bad. You just need to edit s... Jul 29 2004, 01:42 AM  |
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