Lost and oblivious, another poem |
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 Jul 16 2004, 07:17 PM
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 Wendy Clear  Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961  |
I’m so lost and oblivious
To everything in sight The darkness surrounds me I cannot find the light My world is ending Finally it’s the end I’m not scared of death Only dying without a friend The stars in heaven are fading Their light is going out Crashing into the sea This is what pain is all about Something so beautiful Has now rotted away Life was once so precious Now nothing can hold sway The future is now apparent It’s time to say goodbye I didn’t know why this had to end But now I finally know why |
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Jul 17 2004, 02:21 AM
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 ohh gosh no Group: Member Posts: 86 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,892 |
I really like this poem. Ive read some of your other ones but i like this one the most!=]
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Jul 17 2004, 10:41 AM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
oo.. it's nicely written.
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Jul 19 2004, 11:05 PM
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Wendy Clear Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961 |
Thanks for your comments!
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Jul 20 2004, 01:54 AM
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 Visible_TrUst Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,030 |
this is really good!! i write poems too and i have to say that this is a good one
 
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Jul 28 2004, 01:13 PM
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 something more Group: Member Posts: 2,468 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,808 |
wow! VEry nice
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Jul 28 2004, 09:56 PM
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 Roses are red so r my cheeks! Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,115 |
good job beats my poem
 ok good job bye
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