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 Jul 24 2004, 03:24 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i was inspired to write somthing. i saw maia_dc's picture. she's really pretty. so i just started writing things that are good about love and girls and all that jazz, then i was reminded of my one ex who i feel very betrayed by (the transiton is vary appearent) and miss about now, for some reason.
BEAUTY'S HIDDEN AGENDA An elusive being A creature of my dreams To bless wherever she may be With her majesty An enchanted smile Lit the chapel aisle Made the old feel young And constrict their lungs For here mere caress Made the average chest Hold a heart that would pound A tremendous sound Like the wrath of god Prestissimo The glowing goddess Light be shown Her eyes: benign contact with mine Her skin so smooth Her voice could soothe The most ravenous beast For it sounds so sweet How I beg to kiss Her lips that glisten As I dread I’m good as dead Should she remand My extended hand A sweet siren That sings to me I prey we sleep In rhapsody She pulls me nigh For I embrace Her golden touch Angelic grace Heaven is her I wish to stay But misery Reclaims their place Inside my being My tattered soul Her façade hides A demonic goal She betrayed me Catastrophically I live to tell My trip through hell The phantasm takes form of flesh Begin the end the day we met Now all there is is a blood clot In place of where I kept my heart The coldest corpse that walks the lane No stronghold dungeon could restrain My vindictiveness for your foul act Prepare for fourty thousand whacks |
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Jul 24 2004, 08:34 PM
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Wow you are indeed describing a beauty.
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Jul 24 2004, 08:39 PM
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 one.love Group: Member Posts: 258 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,824 |
Bravo. Well Done. You Rock.
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Jul 24 2004, 11:11 PM
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I like the title.
 Haha I want someone to write a poem like that for me! 
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Jul 25 2004, 04:18 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
dangg, your so good at writing!! you rock!
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Jul 26 2004, 11:18 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
QUOTE(Kathleen @ Jul 24 2004, 11:11 PM) I like the title. Haha I want someone to write a poem like that for me! did you read the last part of it? it turns bad! thanks, btw! |
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