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 May 19 2010, 02:42 AM
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so i actually sat down this time and physically drew something out in my sketchbook...
critique is welcome, but i probably wont make anymore major changes after this. i'm officially wiped out. let me know if you notice anything about detailing that i should probably touch up. http://art.exklamity.net |
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May 22 2010, 01:25 AM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Oh, I'm diggin' the simplicity and structure. Well done. However, have you considered maybe seeing how it would be as a dark layout (you know, instead of always having white set as the background or something, try black or a nice shade of gray)? I think that would look pretty nice.
Also, it's not that big of a deal, but the black-to-white transition on the page is a bit clashing at first and makes the sections divided in an abrupt fashion. |
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batman one last f*cking time >.< May 19 2010, 02:42 AM
brooklyneast05 this looks a lot better than the last one. i think... May 19 2010, 08:22 AM ButtsexV2 wat May 19 2010, 03:29 PM spambot I think if you got rid of the white border around ... May 19 2010, 04:10 PM batman like make them black or make them have no spacing ... May 19 2010, 05:07 PM tokyo-rose The empty space beneath the copyright makes the na... May 19 2010, 05:09 PM batman hm yeah, i was planning to have more links, but i ... May 19 2010, 05:23 PM venti-anemoi It looks really good; I love the navigation and th... May 19 2010, 06:24 PM batman thanks guys ^_^
just a question though... i know ... May 20 2010, 12:38 AM brooklyneast05 i don't think you need that. it's like it ... May 20 2010, 10:07 AM synapse looks much better. May 20 2010, 11:51 AM venti-anemoi I think it would look awkward if you added a bar o... May 21 2010, 06:21 PM
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