My once ago friend, A poem that I wrote |
 Feb 20 2010, 10:39 AM
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 "One hell of a butler"  Group: Member Posts: 95 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 696,422  |
This is a poem that I wrote for Creative Writing I, last semester. It is going to get published in this laureate magazine at my school.
My Once Ago Friend As I picked up a lonely flower from the earth I thoughtfully pulled a delicate petal As I was doing so, I reminisced over you My once ago friend who vanished With no farewell leaving me behind To sink to drown in my memories Of your existence My once ago friend, I thought of you As if you were greater than a field of gold I would swim in the deepest ocean To keep the closeness between us My once ago friend I smiled for you Even though you cared for me weakly In return for my kindness to you --- As I came back to reality The wind began to blow swiftly Causing my delicate petal to drift away Leaving me behind as I watched it Move on neglecting the past I now realized that I should do the same |
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Mar 31 2010, 05:29 PM
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 CheccMate Foo! Group: Member Posts: 839 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 487,531 |
I really like this poem!! I just made one that's kinda similar to this but it's more dramatic cuz I'm into spoken word. But kudos!!
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CandyPop My once ago friend Feb 20 2010, 10:39 AM
Uso This is really nice Feb 20 2010, 12:44 PM
CandyPop QUOTE(Uso @ Feb 20 2010, 12:44 PM) This i... Feb 20 2010, 03:30 PM Paladin this is not one of those poems you say is good jus... Feb 24 2010, 01:34 AM CandyPop QUOTE(Paladin @ Feb 24 2010, 01:34 AM) th... Feb 24 2010, 03:06 PM Ekay QUOTE(Paladin @ Feb 23 2010, 10:34 PM) th... Feb 28 2010, 12:19 AM CandyPop Thanks! =D Feb 28 2010, 08:57 AM |
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