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Man On The Moon [Feedback PLEASE], Piece I Started that I Need Feedback On
deteam
post Jun 6 2009, 05:45 PM
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Leave some feedback on what to fix or what do add

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Mikeplyts
post Jun 7 2009, 11:53 AM
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I already posted this before at my forums, but I still think the "glare" in his glasses look strange, like eyeballs. I think you should probally try using a soft brush and just paint around that area with a black-ish color. Idk how to really fix that. Otherwise, nice job! thumbsup.gif
 
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post Jun 7 2009, 06:16 PM
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Woah this looks really cool but I agree with Mike (Mikeplyts). Although honestly, I didn't notice that until he pointed it out. It's great though! flowers.gif
 
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post Jun 7 2009, 06:41 PM
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thanks a lot guys, i actually didn't notice it until he pointed it out lol . . now 4 some tips on how 2 fix that rolleyes.gif

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post Jun 7 2009, 06:44 PM
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Did you make his eyes huge on purpose?

Also, this really has absolutely nothing to do with a moon... (maybe I'm being too literal? You could easily add a moon somewhere .. it would match the title better).
 
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post Jun 7 2009, 06:57 PM
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QUOTE(emberfly @ Jun 7 2009, 07:44 PM) *
Did you make his eyes huge on purpose?

Also, this really has absolutely nothing to do with a moon... (maybe I'm being too literal? You could easily add a moon somewhere .. it would match the title better).



no those were actually on the render to begin with . . and the moon metaphor is just because he makes like spacey futuristic music, which is why i put him in like a space background . . . planets kinda look like moons rolleyes.gif

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post Jun 14 2009, 08:47 AM
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so ne other feed? lol

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