The Awakening, Poem |
 Apr 21 2009, 07:47 AM
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Open your eyes!
Why can't you open them? The worlds end is so close I'm sure you want to see it! I'm by your side so don't be scared Keeping your eyes closed won't protect you It's so close can't you tell. The signs are everywhere It's time to wake up Open your eyes the days of the reborn world are before you. Ok so I wrote this poem a while back and i've even submitted it on a website, here it is My Poem's |
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Superase The Awakening Apr 21 2009, 07:47 AM
synatribe Im guessing it is a blank verse because you do not... Apr 21 2009, 08:58 AM
iGio QUOTE(synatribe @ Apr 21 2009, 09:58 AM) ... Apr 28 2009, 10:20 PM mipadi You the potential for a lot of rich imagery, but y... Apr 23 2009, 10:24 PM Superase Thanks for the advice everyone! Ok so i've... Apr 27 2009, 08:33 AM  |
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