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 Jul 4 2004, 11:33 PM
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 Don't wake ghostie.  Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405  |
i would accept the place where i belong...
if only you were here... because i can see so clear... what you say to me... i would sit outside your window, for all eternity. if i could. and your words, when you sing to me... all i hear is what you say. in the breaths between. if only you could see what i mean. but you don't know me. all you do is sing. but i hear what you say to me i hear, the words between... its lame i know 
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Jul 7 2004, 02:03 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
no it's not lame. to be honest, it was ok, but lil bit weird...hehe so ur poem is telling us that u dont know him, but u see him outside ur window...and hes just singing but u can still feel his breath? hehe i hope that's wat ur talking bot
 
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Jul 17 2004, 11:07 PM
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Don't wake ghostie. Group: Official Member Posts: 3,546 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 2,405 |
its about me stalking a rockstar lol!
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Jul 18 2004, 03:59 AM
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 N.CARTER Group: Member Posts: 1,709 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,742 |
ROCKSTAR BABY! hehes, don't think your things are lamee, they aren't. Really =)
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Jul 18 2004, 01:46 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 7,048 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,696 |
hmmm its good.... but different
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