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 Apr 15 2009, 05:18 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
Well, I was thinking of making some new layouts and I got this, but I'm not sure I did too hot. What do you think?
Thanks. 
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Apr 15 2009, 08:27 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 |
Ohh...the text is...nastayyy lol. It's too bland (text). Make it pop more.
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Apr 15 2009, 10:56 PM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
since the name is "pyromaniac". you might want to incorporate fire in it. Like more than you have now.
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Apr 16 2009, 11:05 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I'm not a fan of the effect on the text. It kinda un-awesome-ifies the rest of the effects. Maybe get rid of the 3D effect and add a gradient that fades to black towards the P?
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Apr 17 2009, 12:46 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Administrator Posts: 8,629 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 498,468 |
Yeah try making the text bigger and tone down the effect at the end of it because the text gets a bit lost within it. And maybe add some little details to the background. Iono.
 But it's cool so far. :)
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Apr 17 2009, 05:31 PM
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 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 |
Looks alright, but like they said, you should make the text pop more and I don't really like the blur you used on the text. Also, the graphic leans more towards stars than fire, so the text and image don't really match up well /=
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