Poem and Quote, yeah, I take responsibility |
 Jun 29 2004, 02:11 PM
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 Clinically Insane!!  Group: Member Posts: 24 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,734  |
This is one of my cracked out poems I wrote when I was feelin' a little down. But When you read it in a certain mind set it makes sense. And the quote's a little weird..but oh well.
Quote: The height of evil has reached the depths of my soul and has torn me apart, but the word love killed me. Poem: We're All Alone All alone in our cold and lonely rooms "why can't I be like them" Is what we ask ourselves Us less fortunate few We continuously search Looking for something so surreal Something to call our own Something to hold We want What it seems everyone else has When in reality It's a figment of our imagination Something we thought was out there But in the end Us, the less fortunate few Find something, deep down inside We fall asleep at night With just enough energy for tomorrow To just keep looking We're All Alone Enjoy |
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Jun 29 2004, 04:08 PM
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 <3 Group: Member Posts: 188 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,801 |
wow, i love it. its how im feeling now...=/
keep it up! |
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Jul 7 2004, 02:26 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
the poem is reallie nice, but the quote i did not get haha
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Jul 7 2004, 02:30 AM
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 What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Wow, there aren't really all that many good blankverse poems out there. But this is good.
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Jul 9 2004, 04:50 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow its really qoood.
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