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Jan 22 2009, 08:19 PM
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This is a short poem I wrote when I was feeling a bit emo after I had broke up with my ex 1.5 years ago. So yeah. Hope you guys like it.
I felt the need to share it, because I see the writing forum livelier, and would like to contribute as well. I titled it "Shit", because that's how I felt when I wrote it. Wasted... to the core I’m faded… colorful illusions paint my world as I enjoy the view through tinted windows. The voice of reason speaks again From the corner of the room, Where the black hole lies I dare not go near For fear I be sucked down. Turn the music louder And drown her out. I move my queen Checkmate. The game is over, But who has won? I’m left to wonder… Time melts on the branch And I sneer I will not be your fool! the only response my lazy echo repeats “..your fool.” Or was it you’re a fool? I could’ve sworn… No. There’s noone here. I’m alone. Wasting away. Fading into the backdrop Of the walls I create. |
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Tung Shit Jan 22 2009, 08:19 PM
superstitious Tung, even though this is pretty emo (actually, no... Jan 22 2009, 08:22 PM
Tung QUOTE(superstitious @ Jan 22 2009, 05:22 ... Jan 23 2009, 05:09 PM
interpretation QUOTE(Tung @ Jan 23 2009, 05:09 PM) Actua... Jan 23 2009, 09:25 PM
interpretation QUOTE(Tung @ Jan 22 2009, 08:19 PM) Time ... Jan 22 2009, 08:45 PM
shannlovin ^ agreeee. Jan 22 2009, 11:09 PM
Tung lol whoaa. i've seen that picture before. lol.... Jan 23 2009, 10:22 PM
interpretation QUOTE(Tung @ Jan 23 2009, 10:22 PM) lol w... Jan 23 2009, 11:13 PM
karmakiller Lol, I knew Cristy was going to make sure you knew... Jan 23 2009, 10:49 PM![]() ![]() |