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Theres nothing left to say, something i made out of the blue
eboarder2020
post Jul 1 2004, 03:27 PM
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Hey guys i wrote this while i was bored today... I personally like it but what do you guys think

Its just been so hard

Making sense of why we had to part.
I remember those times
Seeing you with elegant eyes
Saying lines of love that made you cry

You were special to me
Only you could make me feel so happy
U told me you'd love me forever and a day

Man was it hard when you walked away...
Even now I still miss you
Going about my day thinking of times that used to.
And now all is left and gone
Nothing left to say but I miss you megan...Forever and a day
 
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post Jul 2 2004, 07:07 AM
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wow... that was beautiful.
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 02:21 AM
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awww that's so sad that u guys broke up and all...and thats sucha cute poem!! spelled out as miss you megan...aww!! nice job! gived me tears...well lil
 
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post Jul 7 2004, 02:23 AM
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An acrostic poem and it rhymes! Wonderful. That is so sweet. happy.gif
 

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