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 Dec 23 2008, 11:57 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots.  Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291  |
What do you think of it so far? Any constructive critiscm would be great. I'm planning on using this for a site I'm opening up.
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Dec 23 2008, 11:58 PM
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 show me a garden thats bursting to life Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 |
Awesome? To be honest, there isn't much to critique you on...
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Dec 24 2008, 12:24 AM
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 Death is a promise given to us at birth Group: Official Designer Posts: 4,757 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,459 |
make the light brighter. it looks dull right now with the red and the black like that.
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Dec 24 2008, 01:42 AM
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QUOTE(moorepocket @ Dec 23 2008, 09:24 PM)  make the light brighter. it looks dull right now with the red and the black like that. I agree. Other than that, there really isn't much else to say. |
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Dec 24 2008, 01:49 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Thanks? lol.
I would but I already merged the layers and save and I had to use MANY brushes so I guess I'll leave it as it is.
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Dec 28 2008, 09:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 |
I think the background should be a dark grey. not black.
and on the main sections with gradients at the sides its such a sharp stop. make it like so it fades at the edges. |
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Dec 28 2008, 09:53 PM
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 Two can keep a secret if one of them is dead. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,682 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 156,187 |
not digging that red... looks out of place and the affiliates header as well. since its further down i say just stick to a simple header without all the swirly lines.
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Dec 29 2008, 11:57 AM
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 Senior Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,507 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 571,541 |
I Personally Thought that The First image was the image you were Showing to us...
so i was like What The H311! then i saw the other ones and went "Oh! so this is what he is going to tell us about..." I Like the layout, but the Dullness is botherin me.. |
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Dec 29 2008, 03:52 PM
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 R.I.P JDL Group: Member Posts: 178 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 652,668 |
The red just doesn't do it for me. It seems out of place. You have the bright colors of the brushes then you have the dark red. It just doesn't seem to go. But the concept is good.
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Dec 29 2008, 04:31 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,028 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 579,129 |
I think you overdid the whooshiness with those brushes. It's too much.
I kind of hate it- the thing behind all the text. |
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Dec 30 2008, 12:28 AM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
I'm taking into consideration of changing the layout so what would everybody agree on? I really want to use a gradient so what gradient do you think would look nice on a dark grey background? Should I use some brushes?
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