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 Dec 11 2008, 07:36 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 31 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,802  |
Here is a banner I just created. please don't be harsh when critiquing it.
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Dec 11 2008, 07:46 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 944 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 663,413 |
I like it :) Rob is hot!
But.. The picture in the middle, with the blue, is not the same color as the others. You can tell it is different then the others so it looks out of place. Also, the texture is covering too much of the pictures, maybe try to erase a little more or set it to a different opacity. The text is horrible, it is just kinda there. But, I suck at text so I cant really offer you any advice on that Lol. It does need a bit of work tho. |
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Dec 11 2008, 07:53 PM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
The brushes you used are kinda overpowering the picture imo
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Dec 11 2008, 07:55 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 31 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,802 |
it's just texture i used as a mask that's why it is like it is
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Dec 11 2008, 08:04 PM
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 Sex, Blood, & RocknRoll Group: People Staff Posts: 5,305 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 596,480 |
The text could be a lot better, and the picture in the middle could be blended more. Also there is too much of the texture, It looks weird to me.
Nice though. |
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Dec 11 2008, 08:12 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 31 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,802 |
QUOTE(Drama @ Dec 11 2008, 08:04 PM)  The text could be a lot better, and the picture in the middle could be blended more. Also there is too much of the texture, It looks weird to me. Nice though. Thanks! |
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Dec 11 2008, 08:14 PM
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 Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
Yeah I agree on blending that middle pic a bit more. Also, you could just adjust the opacity (transparency) of the texture.
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Dec 11 2008, 08:15 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 31 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 699,802 |
ok
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Dec 11 2008, 09:51 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 631 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 619,081 |
Overall I think I like it, but I agree with what everyone else is saying. The texture is too much, especially on that middle picture. A different font would probably fit this better too.
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Dec 11 2008, 10:10 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 1,288 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,380 |
I like it, i agree with everything thats been said.
But i don't think its a banner...haha, but yeah good job. |
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Dec 11 2008, 11:11 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 |
I think it's too much.
The texture makes it look washed out and not in a good way. The blending is horrible. Critiques are harsh no matter what, so there's no point in asking us not to be. |
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Dec 11 2008, 11:13 PM
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 AIDS at RAVES. Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
you should definately work on image enhancements, it would make the overall blend nicer.
and I would also choose a different text |
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Dec 13 2008, 02:08 PM
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Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 |
^Yeah, I would also think about changing the text.
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Dec 13 2008, 06:46 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
ugh TWILIGHT.
but its nice, the grungieness i really like as with the dark theme. the actor isnt half bad looking either. |
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Dec 14 2008, 04:55 AM
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 So then, I can keep her? Group: Member Posts: 20 Joined: Jul 2008 Member No: 664,304 |
i agree with people here.
I love it, but it needs work, especially the picture in the middle. Maybe lighten the brushes as well. If you don't mind, I'd like to copy your idea and see my outcome, and I'll show you, if it's alright with you, TwilightBella. |
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