Feedback please? Options

[skyerawr]

Just got to a point with this layout where i'm thinking i need feedback
This time i've actually tried to blend better
And i couldn't not make a layout with these lyrics,
i love the song.

So yeah, any feedback is much appreciated. changes can be made easily :]
I'm thinking the bottom blend needs to be more like the top one, but im not sure how :S

Layout:

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Thanks :]

Reason for edit: Please use [thumb] tags instead of [img] tags when posting large images. - Mike