FEEL CLOTHING, Jon H.M. Chan - Flash Client Project Options

[xXYouMeBedNowXx]

Hey guys, I'm doing a site for a new philanthropic fashion firm, and I'd really appreciate some feedback from anyone. I value this community's opinions, so feel free to let me know about anything!

http://www.jonhmchan.com/feel/index2.swf

[Mikeplyts]

Uh... that link doesn't work for me. The page doesn't want to show.

[xXYouMeBedNowXx]

Try it now? It should work!

[manny-the-dino]

I like it. I love your flash designs. The only thing is that the font is a bit hard to read in the navigation & some of the images you used have too much noise on them. Also the transparent bar sometimes blocks peoples' faces. but great job!

[*Janette*]

wow, I like it a lot. i agree with the font. it's hard to read, but i`m not wearing my glasses so that's probably why.

i like the music too.

[schizo]

It's amazing. The photos look a little stretched on my screen, but that's pretty cool how they expand and contract to fit all screen sizes.

[Simba]

I think this is one of your more practical designs. It looks clean, but it's not too flashy! One of my favorites from you.

[markmejia]

I really like this. And omfg @ the music. D:

[Tomates]

I really like it. The flash is awesome, i love the pictures and the music fits incredibly well. Good job : D

[xXYouMeBedNowXx]

Thanks so far for everything everyone! Just a few specific things if anyone can help out:

- Does the music skip, does it stream correctly for you?
- How hard is it to read some the text, esp. the navigation? Would it be better to bold it?
- How long does it take for you to load the movie? This has been an issue with some of my past designs, and I've made this one a bit differently to try and address the issue.

[venti-anemoi]

Simple, but very fitting. It takes about 30 seconds to load for me, and when the site first loads (the image and white bar thing), the music skips a little. On some of the backgrounds, "clothing with a conscience" is impossible to read, as well as your credit. Other than that, I really like it. I love all of your flash designs; they're always amazing. :]

Oh, and the text is a bit unclear/blurry sometimes. I think bolding it might work.

[manny-the-dino]

Thanks so far for everything everyone! Just a few specific things if anyone can help out:

- Does the music skip, does it stream correctly for you?
- How hard is it to read some the text, esp. the navigation? Would it be better to bold it?
- How long does it take for you to load the movie? This has been an issue with some of my past designs, and I've made this one a bit differently to try and address the issue.

-Music streams correctly for me.
-It's not that hard but it could be better. Hmm bold? Try it out. Tell us when you do so we can see.
-At first it took a while. But after, it loaded faster.

[Blaqheartedstar]

like everyone said the text is hard to read. but everything is great, the music fits soo well. what makes it cool is that it starts before the whole site finishes loading up.
neat.

Thanks so far for everything everyone! Just a few specific things if anyone can help out:

- Does the music skip, does it stream correctly for you?
- How hard is it to read some the text, esp. the navigation? Would it be better to bold it?
- How long does it take for you to load the movie? This has been an issue with some of my past designs, and I've made this one a bit differently to try and address the issue.

1 music skips a bit for me. when i first started it up, it skipped and restarted its self. then skipped again but continued to play fine.
2 the text on the navigation is pretty small and light. same with the rest of the site.
3 loading was pretty fast for me.

[xXYouMeBedNowXx]

Okay, I've tried fixing the quality of the text on the navigation by bolding it, is it any better?

[Blaqheartedstar]

Content section is a little better.
Is this what you see?

^ darker... but hard to read.

^ can barely read that

^ its a little better but i'm not sure why it looks weird. could it be that the flash stretches to the size of the screen its viewed in?
Also the music skipped... not sure whats up with that.

[so0o_contagious]

i love it.
1. musics great.
2.font needs to be smooth. not so much bolder, but smooth? i think.
3. takes about 20 seconds to load but its fast afterwards.

great job.

[Harp]

That's f**king amazing!