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[TocasMiracle]

Quick piece of work pretty bored.

Constructive Crit



Ah it's f**ked now.

[TocasMiracle]

imo, it looks really incomplete. It seems to be missing something, I'm not even sure exactly what you made. It's also very small, and the "TM" around the border shouldn't be cut-off it makes the observer focus too much on what is written there, when they shouldn't be. Either leave it completely shown on your graphic, which would be too obstrusive in my opinion, or omit it completely from the graphic. Your choice. (I'd remove it ).

It looked normal on the computer then when i uploaded it wasn't right that's why it says Ah It's f**ked Below because i uploaded an improvement and lost the original pretty damn stupid.

[Gigi]

To be honest, your graphic is much too dark, too small, and too detailed to make out. I don't even know what's going on. I thought this was a trick post at first and even made sure I wasn't looking at one of those scary gif's.

It just looks like there's absolutely no point to what you made. I think posting a different image would help...anything bigger?

[schizo]

I don't really understand what it's supposed to be. I guess it's supposed to be abstract, but I'm having a hard time even seeing that. As they said before, maybe something bigger would make it easier for us to see the details and all that?

[markmejia]

I have to agree with everyone. It does look very incomplete, and the "TM" cut off along the bottom and right edges looks just really pointless. As well as the "Aaron" that seems to be under the greyish .. thing. Try not to go for simplicity too much, and create an actual focal point that everyone can see and find pleasing to the eye.

[Tomates]

I dont really like it. No offence. Its too dark, too plain, and overall there really isnt much to it to make it that interesting. It just looks like you put random layers on top of each other.

Sorry