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 Sep 2 2008, 09:06 PM
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made this for a friend whose kinda blue. what do u think? anything & everything welcome. thx much
Reason for edit: Thumbed. - Cristy
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Sep 2 2008, 09:24 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 1 Joined: Sep 2008 Member No: 682,258 |
i think its cute but i don't really like the patterns used. they don't seem to really fit to me.
all in all, i like. |
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Sep 2 2008, 09:25 PM
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Cute but it doesn't seem to go together since the picture and the patterns are way different quality and color. Maybe but a texture on top and play around with it.
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Sep 2 2008, 09:25 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 |
the outline is too big, and you should have putted the text somewhere away from the skin. it's one of those styles they do now, but it's okay.
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Sep 2 2008, 09:42 PM
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 DDR \\ I'm Dee :) Group: Mentor Posts: 8,662 Joined: Mar 2006 Member No: 384,020 |
It's alright, but the patterns seem a little rough. Also, I would've done more with the picture. Sharpen it, change the saturation, something.
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Sep 2 2008, 10:23 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
darker colors?
those were default patterns, i just DL some new ones. going to go work on this somemore. -] ---EDIT--- got another one done. better yea or ney? i had no idea what you ment by no lettering on skin ha!
Reason for edit: Please thumb your images if they stretch the board. :) - Cristy
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Sep 2 2008, 11:46 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 681,928 |
She reminds me of a cyclops.
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Sep 3 2008, 03:33 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(shakeene @ Sep 2 2008, 11:23 PM)  ---EDIT--- got another one done. http://i37.tinypic.com/2l426q.jpg better yea or ney? i had no idea what you ment by no lettering on skin ha! Hey, please thumb your images if they stretch the board. :) I thumbed both your images for you this time. I don't think the two patterns in this one match very well; they're even more mismatched than in your first image. I think what Beenly meant is that you should put the credit line elsewhere in the image, and not on her body at all. Put in in the upper left-hand corner instead, I guess. |
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Sep 3 2008, 05:43 PM
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 torn Group: Official Designer Posts: 953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,718 |
The colors and patterns in the first one are definitely better. I'm not really a fan of this kind of graphic, but I guess it's not too bad.
The photo isn't exctracted very smoothly - there are a lot of jagged edges, which really show in the stroking. I felt like you could have doing more with the image or found a better quality one - the bottom half is rather blurry, and it seems dull in comparison to the bright background. Some of the lines of the background sunburst-like thing aren't straight either (it bugs me; I'm OCD XD sorry). |
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Sep 3 2008, 05:46 PM
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 R.I.P JDL Group: Member Posts: 178 Joined: May 2008 Member No: 652,668 |
the first was better o_o but i agree with everyone else about the patterns..they don't seem to match and such.
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Sep 3 2008, 09:59 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 254 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 682,007 |
alright guys, thx mucho.
ill take everything to heart, im becoming better & better each & every day. aha, anyways sorry about the resizing thing, i was trying to figure out how to do it. |
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