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Hellborn, A Poem song thing
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post Aug 22 2008, 11:32 PM
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In this dark world I lie
Hiding behind a wall of solid stone
Take a breath dive deeper into the unknown
The walls behind me falls around me
Chained to the wall I can't break free
Burning inside me is someone new
Someone who will set me free.
Liberation from this darkness
End to the insanity

In this world anew
strange and yet perfectly true
this demon comes at a price
yet again we roll the dice
Vice gets tighter, pain sinks in
drawing me deeper within
Icy cold draws my life
fingers of death
stealing my breath
Its to late now.
 
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post Aug 30 2008, 01:44 PM
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QUOTE(MolecularStudios @ Aug 22 2008, 09:32 PM) *
The walls behind me falls around me

It's too late now.

That was really good. I think it has a good amount of imagery in it. Kudos. thumbsup.gif
 

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