My Knight In Shining Armor, [Poem] Options

[Firiath]

Nail me to the cross of a bleeding heart
Tie me up and bind me to myself
Bound to my loneliness
Waiting for someone to release me from my bonds.

Put me on the stage of a thousand words
Force my soul out of me and laugh
Kept to my solitude
Praying for my only salvation and my hope.

Write a song about my troubled life
Tell so many truths and mock me
Left in my secret
Hoping someone cares and will set me free.

Read my thoughts like a book
And say them out for others to hear
Joined with my darkness
I guess I've lost all hope that I once had.

Let someone come along and try
They'll fail to save me and you know
Made to love the shadows
What twisted demon have I become?

Give me my knight in shining armor
He'll save me from the nothingness
The light will always beat the dark
My one and only love….
My everything.

I love you.


I seem to be going sappy ._. AHHHHHHHHH! But I do love my boyfriend... Hahaha

[*absinthe*]

I think you start of of strong but towards the end, it kind of seems like you you slowly just put more random thoughts to see where they'd fit. I don't know. This is just my opinion. But I think it's still pretty good. :)

[Firiath]

Thanks =]
I just write and see what comes out - I rarely change anything.