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 Aug 17 2008, 05:07 PM
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First off, i use Paint.NET, so i can't use brushes.. But, do you think i should add anything else? Thanks (: EDIT: Thank yas paperplane for moving thisss! |
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Aug 18 2008, 11:37 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Jan 2008 Member No: 611,919 |
Ah, i got impatient and submittied it lol
 I'll have a go at moving everything around.. maybe i can figure something out. It will probably get rejected, so maybe if i work on it now, i can submit a better version of it later |
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Aug 18 2008, 11:53 AM
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 poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
I think if you cut some of the bottom off it would look perfect.
Otherwise i love it. But theres too much space below her |
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Aug 18 2008, 12:04 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Jan 2008 Member No: 611,919 |
^ That's a point actually (:
I was submitting it as a wallpaper, but i could just do it as a banner. Thanks! |
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Aug 18 2008, 02:49 PM
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 Oh Wow ... Group: Official Designer Posts: 688 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 468,522 |
QUOTE(Tomates @ Aug 18 2008, 09:53 AM)  I think if you cut some of the bottom off it would look perfect. Otherwise i love it. But theres too much space below her Yeah, that's pretty much the only thing I'd do. I love the font and the colors. |
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Aug 18 2008, 02:56 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Jan 2008 Member No: 611,919 |
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Aug 18 2008, 03:07 PM
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 AKA RockIt Studios Group: Official Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 421,809 |
ohmygosh. Kristen Stewart. <3
I think you shouldn't have completely colored her, though. like, should have lowered the opacity on just that part, to make her look a little more real/stand out. catch my drift? the birds (I think that's what they are...) are weird. and, uhm...maybe give her something to look at? 
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Aug 18 2008, 03:20 PM
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poison Group: Official Member Posts: 4,806 Joined: Mar 2008 Member No: 629,020 |
QUOTE(jerusalem @ Aug 18 2008, 03:56 PM) I like it much better |
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Aug 18 2008, 08:57 PM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
QUOTE(RockItStudios @ Aug 18 2008, 04:07 PM) and, uhm...maybe give her something to look at?  i agree. it just looks too random that she's staring at nothingness. otherwise i like it. the font is pretty. 
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Aug 18 2008, 09:08 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Jan 2008 Member No: 611,919 |
To me her expression looks like she's not necessarily looking at something, rather that she's thinking or something. I don't know, it just seems odd to me that that's an issue
 Ehhhh i'm not really pleased with this at all. The wallpaper just looks retarded and the banner looks too.. odd lol (: Thanks for everyone's help though! |
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Aug 18 2008, 09:58 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Head Staff Posts: 18,173 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 108,478 |
QUOTE(jerusalem @ Aug 18 2008, 03:56 PM) The cropped version is better, since Kristen looks like she's just floating in midair in the original. I agree that you should give Kristen a focal point. |
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