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[dosomethin888]

http://i36.tinypic.com/s0z8kp.jpg

What do you guys think?

Edit:
Okay, here is the new one:

http://i36.tinypic.com/15wl8nl.jpg

2nd Edit:

Okay, here is the new one with the images cut out

http://i37.tinypic.com/2qioe2x.jpg

3rd edit:

http://i38.tinypic.com/71h6oo.jpg
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[schizo]

Eh, it's ok. I don't really see how the swirly things in the background go with the images. Also, the edges of the text for "Slow Dance On" aren't smooth.

[dosomethin888]

Eh, it's ok. I don't really see how the swirly things in the background go with the images. Also, the edges of the text for "Slow Dance On" aren't smooth.

Ya your right. Let me make a few changes to it. I think Ill just take the "Slow Dance on" completelyl off and blend the images in the back with some splatters. Ill repost it.

[karmakiller]

Oops, I'll wait for you to re-post your edit and then I'll come back comment on it

[berrypop90]

It would look better if you cut the girls out instead of blending the backgrounds together. The gray/white background above the swirls is kinda tacky.

[dosomethin888]

It would look better if you cut the girls out instead of blending the backgrounds together. The gray/white background above the swirls is kinda tacky.

How would I do that tho? That would be kinda hard

[berrypop90]

Use either the pen tool or the lasso tool. What program do you use?

[nikx618]

i like the newer one, its nice[:
but maybe 'fashion crave' could be written differently...?
idk, maybe. but its nice[:

[dosomethin888]

Use either the pen tool or the lasso tool. What program do you use?

I use paint shop pro 9

[dosomethin888]

i like the newer one, its nice[:
but maybe 'fashion crave' could be written differently...?
idk, maybe. but its nice[:

Thanks =) Ya, Im really bad with text lol

[Tomates]

I really like it.
I wish i was creative right now ;A;
damn im too lazy to be creative atm though

[karmakiller]

Yay, PSP user ^5.

I like the colors that you decided to use, but I also think it would be better if you cut around her body and got rid of the grey background. It distracts from the overall design. To do this in PSP, you can use the selection tool, just change your settings (where you can set it from point-to-point, shape, or freehand) and use the freehand selection. From there you can trace around her and delete the grey background.

[dosomethin888]

Yay, PSP user ^5.

I like the colors that you decided to use, but I also think it would be better if you cut around her body and got rid of the grey background. It distracts from the overall design. To do this in PSP, you can use the selection tool, just change your settings (where you can set it from point-to-point, shape, or freehand) and use the freehand selection. From there you can trace around her and delete the grey background.

Yay =) PSP users: United we stand, divided we fall. Lol.

Okay, Im working on it now and then I will put it up when im done. It should only take me a bit.

[dosomethin888]

i edited it

[synatribe]

it looks okay ,what I dont like is how the cut outs are black and white, and the background is orange. it defeats the contrast. I would say add a color layer? to the girls?

[dosomethin888]

it looks okay ,what I dont like is how the cut outs are black and white, and the background is orange. it defeats the contrast. I would say add a color layer? to the girls?

Oh, I kinda like the b&w with the orange. How does it ruin the contrast?

[synatribe]

the focus gets taken away from the cut outs. The background is to strong for the image and it feels like the images are of low quality because the background is bright and the images only have 2 tones, but idk, thats just me :]

[dosomethin888]

the focus gets taken away from the cut outs. The background is to strong for the image and it feels like the images are of low quality because the background is bright and the images only have 2 tones, but idk, thats just me :]

Oh ok. Ill try that out. Do you have any tips on how I could do that? Im thinking orange...