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 Jul 14 2008, 05:01 PM
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I'm trying to improve my skills on photoshop like, drawing wise so i drew these.
any advice? I drew them all with the round brush and the lasso tool. I can't use the pen tool at all. 
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Jul 14 2008, 05:22 PM
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Looks alright, but the pizza...not so much. At first glance it was okay but when I looked again it looked like it needs a shave.
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Jul 14 2008, 05:26 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 351 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 543,127 |
The green specks, right?
I hate that too. My mom kept telling me i should put it.  Now ima take it off since i have another persons opinion. 
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Jul 14 2008, 05:29 PM
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peppers: they look cute but i think you could have done a better job at like "separating" them. like i think you could have made the line where they both meet, darker, so it doesn't looks like a uni-pepper.
pizza: you could have done this in a smoother way. like the edges are so jagged. i think it looks pretty realistic except for the crust. the bottom of the crust looks weird, tbh. soda: haha, it's so cute. but again, it could be smoother. i highly suggest using the pen tool next time; your designs will come out better. i know it's hard at first but practice makes perfect. 
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Jul 14 2008, 05:33 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,435 Joined: Feb 2007 Member No: 506,205 |
I really like the peppers.
The pizza does look a bit hairy, and I think the cheese needs to be a different color. It looks like American cheese. The shake is nice. Maybe add a logo or something to make it more realistic? |
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Jul 14 2008, 08:01 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 351 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 543,127 |
i fixed the pizza cause the hairiness was annoying me too.
xD thanks for all the advice. :] ima fix em all, make em smoother, add a logo and such. |
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Jul 15 2008, 09:30 AM
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 <(^_^<) DANCE!(>^_^)> Group: Official Member Posts: 1,304 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 586,621 |
the peppers are definately the better of the three.
when i first saw them i started craving Papa John's.  overall i think for a beginner and for the tools you used, they aren't so bad. keep at it, you can only get better! 
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Jul 15 2008, 11:50 PM
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well i think that you did a great job :) haha...
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Jul 16 2008, 06:27 PM
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For the peppers, I agree with Natalia (manny-the-dino) about it looking like one whole pepper at first glance. Defining that line would do wonders. I like the editing you did on the pizza (making it less hairy). I think it needs some pepperoni. I still feel like it's missing things on there, but that could just be me.For the cup, (as previously mentioned) the edges are really choppy. The pen tool would definitely work wonders. You'll get the hang of it eventually. Adding a logo (also previously mentioned) seems like a good idea, too. QUOTE(mizzkewl06 @ Jul 15 2008, 04:30 PM)  overall i think for a beginner and for the tools you used, they aren't so bad. keep at it, you can only get better! I agree. Keep it up. :) |
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Jul 16 2008, 10:02 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 786 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 488,341 |
Pizza looks great now. Made me hungry.
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