"Gasp", Another poem |
 Jun 22 2008, 12:21 PM
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Standing on the sand
Trying to glance across the sea Taking a shallow dive into water Spread eagled falling from the cliff Head first into oblivion Slowly falling farther and farther The water swirls around him Insanity gripping as he gasps for air He tries to swim to the surface Slowly losing consciousness Then he breaks the surface And the sun streaks his face |
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Vaguememory "Gasp" Jun 22 2008, 12:21 PM
Vaguememory Thanks allot! I really appreciate the feedback... Jul 2 2008, 12:59 AM  |
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