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MOVIE POSTER <3, it's a myspace challenge group challenge thing.
ChewySurprises
post Jun 27 2008, 11:35 AM
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HELLO!
I made a movie poster for a myspace challenge group(RockOurCoeur) and i just don't think it's good enough compared to everyone elses. I really need some advice / comments.
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 11:56 AM
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Umm...Well, first off, that movie sounds absolutely horrible. Just saying. Sorry if you're the one who came up with it. ermm.gif

Anyway, on to the design. I think it's a bit busy. I like the way the title looks, but the rest of the text needs work. The text for the description is blurry, and I really don't like how their names look at all. A more subtle background would look better. That city has way too much going on already, and then all that other stuff was placed on top of it. I think the arrangement looks nice, though.
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 12:02 PM
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It looks pretty good but the weird yellow spots on the people are.. well, weird. And the white outline thing around Avril Lavigne looks really odd since Chad Michael Murray doesn't have that.
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 12:13 PM
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It looks pretty good but the weird yellow spots on the people are.. well, weird. And the white outline thing around Avril Lavigne looks really odd since Chad Michael Murray doesn't have that.

um she's wearing those wedding things, since it's a picture from her wedding(=
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 12:15 PM
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QUOTE(schizo @ Jun 27 2008, 11:56 AM) *
Umm...Well, first off, that movie sounds absolutely horrible. Just saying. Sorry if you're the one who came up with it. ermm.gif

Anyway, on to the design. I think it's a bit busy. I like the way the title looks, but the rest of the text needs work. The text for the description is blurry, and I really don't like how their names look at all. A more subtle background would look better. That city has way too much going on already, and then all that other stuff was placed on top of it. I think the arrangement looks nice, though.


I ALWAYS have problems with fonts :[
aww i really like the story (=
i'll change it though. it probably sounds weird -_-"
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 01:14 PM
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um she's wearing those wedding things, since it's a picture from her wedding(=


Ohh. Yea I had no idea what that was.
 
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post Jun 27 2008, 02:13 PM
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I don't think i really like this one. The story is so typical and boring. I'm not going to enter the contest, but i'll put up the revised movie poster(=

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