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 Jun 25 2008, 09:54 PM
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Jun 25 2008, 09:55 PM
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 /人◕‿‿◕人\ Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
Ok thats better.
Its pretty simple. But thats not necessarily a bad thing. Its better than most flash layouts I've seen. |
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Jun 25 2008, 10:06 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 54 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 544,170 |
Alright, Now try
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Jun 25 2008, 10:33 PM
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 N!CK Group: Member Posts: 148 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 144,660 |
wow, thats pretty sweet for a first attempt. that puts professionals to shame. great job!
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Jun 26 2008, 10:08 AM
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I think it looks really good. The white box at the top could use something, though. It seems a bit empty or out-of-place to me. Overall, great job for a first attempt. :D
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Jun 26 2008, 10:56 AM
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 Cornflakes :D Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,541 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 322,923 |
Its alright, its really plain and simple and then once you get to the bottom, its like OH YAY COLOR. So yea..add more color elsewhere.
Also if you go to what im interested in, and it has those two button or images whatever, and then you go back up once those images sometimes show through.. |
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Jun 27 2008, 05:26 PM
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 ello xD Group: Member Posts: 32 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,302 |
its cool
nice and simple . |
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Jun 27 2008, 05:36 PM
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I'm just sitting here contentedly pushing those tabs up and down...
Lovely first attempt; the coding and organisation is spot on - now just to incorporate more design into your future stuff. |
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Jun 27 2008, 05:42 PM
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 the bird and the bee sides! Group: Member Posts: 1,697 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 201,280 |
It's plain but functional. I kind of like the simplicity, but a bit more color would be nice. Good job
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Jun 27 2008, 05:49 PM
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I like this a lot. Very simple and clean and easy to get around. It's interesting.
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Jun 28 2008, 12:56 AM
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 kthxbai Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,832 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 621,203 |
i don't see flash anywhere..
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Jun 28 2008, 01:18 AM
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QUOTE(emberfly @ Jun 28 2008, 12:56 AM)  i don't see flash anywhere.. You must be crazy. |
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Jun 28 2008, 02:37 AM
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Okay, So I've made a few changes yesterday, and I didn't have a bunch of time to post about them today. Anywho, for those of you interested, here we go..
Changes
Possible Ideas
So tell me what you guys think. All comments are appreciated a bunch!  .Commentary Let me start by saying thank you to all who commented, below are answers/commentary to some posts that were made. QUOTE("xN1CK08x") wow, thats pretty sweet for a first attempt. that puts professionals to shame. great job! Thanks, please note that this is definitely not my first time working with CSS/XHTML. Been playing with that for around a year now, give or take a few months. QUOTE("schizo") I think it looks really good. The white box at the top could use something, though. It seems a bit empty or out-of-place to me. Overall, great job for a first attempt. :D Thank you, I think you are very correct in saying that it needs something.. I'm not quite sure what yet, which is why this thread is on this forum :D. QUOTE("emberfly") i don't see flash anywhere.. Good Job... |
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Jun 28 2008, 11:56 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 54 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 544,170 |
Today I made some very dramatic color changes, not all of the content has been added yet, and the text on my tabs aren't rendering properly for some reason, but tomorrow I'll fix it and add more content for people to see.
Tell me if it looks better or worse. ~WW |
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Jun 29 2008, 01:05 AM
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Cornflakes :D Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,541 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 322,923 |
Oh I like the changes, it seems like there is to much space at the top though.
I love the Zune card, I love my zune :D |
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Jun 30 2008, 04:09 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 40 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,930 |
WOW?! First attempt in Flash...omfg!!
What?? That really is pretty nice... So you understand AS and all that stuff :D I couldn't manage to do that! It's maybe just a little too simple... Like you're Nickname place somewhere nicely and add a cool color, maybe??!! aym |
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