Collide, Poem-ish thing Options

[vogueXdirge]

Collide

When I saw you from across the room,
I knew I wanted you.
The alcohol roared through my system
And the drugs raged through my brain.

There was no hope from the start,
As bodies grinded together
And the music shook the world;
The world of drugs and lust.

Our eyes met for the first time
In the middle of this world.
Sweat rolled down your neck
And your breath whispered sweet nothings in my ear.

We started to dance
Softly at first and then it picked up.
We were smoke and fire at the same time.
The heat rose and so did the desire.

This world closed and people left.
You walked me to your car silver and glinting.
We rode off into the night,
Stopping at your urban castle.

You invited me onto your cloud,
Turning off the sun and getting closer.
The blood in my veins quickened its cycle,
And my brain went numb.

When you touched me, you shocked me.
When you kissed me, you crazed me.
When you pressed against me, you pleased me.
When you undressed me, you destroyed me.

Our bodies collided,
Like a bomb hitting the earth.
Pain and pleasure forced themselves through me,
Making me gasp for air.

The moon shone through your window,
A spotlight on our love making.
It showed every lick, every small bite.
Tonight’s passion is illuminated.

At the end of it all,
You fell upon me gasping.
Kissing you roughly I tasted the salt of sweat,
And the sweetness of love.

In the morning
When the world is silent
I looked for you
But I only found a message on my phone.

The love we made was electrifying,
And you held me tight in your eyes.
I’ll see you later tonight my lover,
PS: Thanks for the Collide.

I wrote this a LONG time ago so forgive me for any mistakes or awkward phrases.
But ENJOY!
& tell me what you think.

[emberfly]

so that is beyond creative; amazing.
















pervert

[vogueXdirge]

I fail to see how it's perverted...but whatever...

[mizzkewl06]

i think this is a good poem. it makes me think of a certain someone who is special to me... i like it! nice job!

[vogueXdirge]

I'm glad you liked it.
:3

[superstitious]

That was really fantastic. Steamy, but not at all grotesque or verbose.