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Some constructive crticism please., Portfolio concept. |
Apr 30 2008, 10:02 PM
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Justified true belief. ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 72 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,687 |
Well I've been messing around with the concept of a portfolio for all my work that i've done in school and on my spare time and this is what I have come up with recently. I just wanted to know what people thought and if there is anything that should be tweaked or changed. I feel like the content part (where the news feed and the artwork are displayed) needs a banner or some sort of header but im not sure...maybe it's better left the way it is. well here it is
>>> My Website <<< |
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Apr 30 2008, 10:07 PM
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
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Apr 30 2008, 10:45 PM
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Justified true belief. ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 72 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,687 |
I can't really complain about anything. I LOVE the setup. It's very clean and simple. I like the colors too. One minor problem. If you widen the screen resolution, or shorten it, the main info shrinks/inflates. I think I fixed this just now so if you happen to check back would you mind verifying...im not sure if I fixed what you were talking about |
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Apr 30 2008, 10:46 PM
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![]() /人◕‿‿◕人\ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,283 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 602,927 |
That problem wasn't fixed. Try my solution and use the <p> tag.
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May 1 2008, 12:41 AM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,815 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 423,396 |
I agree with the setup - it looks hawt and simple. Beautiful blue&white color scheme too.
I do, however, think you could have better font choices, particularly for the blog page. I feel as though the blog titles should be bolder and bigger, but not too big. I can see it in bold Arial, lowercase, 16-18 pt size, and with -1 or -2 letter spacing. I dunno, whatever makes the titles stand out more. And for the blog content, maybe you could use 8.5 pt Verdana, or maybe even use 11 pt Georgia or something. I also really like the simple organization of the works section. All I have to complain about is how the thumbnails are pixelated. But yeah, great job with everything. The site kinda reminds me of 4impressions.net. :] |
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May 1 2008, 10:25 AM
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![]() Melieized ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
it's very nice but imo, i think it's too plan. it doesn't tell you really what the website is all about. it would be a great myspace layout more than a website.
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May 1 2008, 10:35 AM
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‹(. .)› ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 2,367 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,089 |
^ it's a portfolio site, and sites showcasing portfolio work should be plain and simple, as to make the actual work stand out.
i like the setup (obviously, i'm a minimalist fanwhore). the only thing i'd really complain about is the cursor 'cause i'm not a fan of anything that's not the default cursor ;X also, opacity of the main layer could be a little opaque; i think the text against the patterned background becomes a little busy. i think you have a lot of play room. as suggested in above posts, you could try many other different fonts. |
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May 1 2008, 10:42 AM
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![]() Melieized ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 1,372 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 478,715 |
^ it's a portfolio site, and sites showcasing portfolio work should be plain and simple, as to make the actual work stand out. yes but you don't get that impression as soon as you open the site. it looked like a blog to me when i opened it. it doesn't say it's a portfolio for someone or anything like that. maybe i'm being picky but that's just my opinion of course |
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May 1 2008, 02:52 PM
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Farewell, Hello. I'm Colleen. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 222 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 539,346 |
First of all - I really really like this. Especially the colors you used.
Although, I thought it looked a lot like a blog as well. I'm sure I wouldn't have if there was some sort of indication that it was a portfolio (other than having to read the "info"). The opacity is also a bit low on the navigation; I didnt's see it at first :P (Maybe I'm just blind - that really could be the case, haha). & PS, I LOVE your blog layout. |
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May 1 2008, 04:39 PM
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im with the marching band ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 740 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 491,167 |
i love the idea and the background, but its kinda simple for now, but i like the top nav
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May 1 2008, 06:02 PM
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![]() torn ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 953 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,718 |
I like the setup of everything. :] The bits of teal are nice, although I do agree with making the opacity of the navigation a bit darker.
In the portfolio section, when I click on the piece and it pops up in the lightbox, I can't exit it unless I hit "esc" on my keyboard. For some reason, it doesn't let me click on the "close x" link. |
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May 1 2008, 06:22 PM
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Farewell, Hello. I'm Colleen. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 222 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 539,346 |
^ The same thing happend to me as well
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May 1 2008, 06:25 PM
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![]() AIDS at RAVES. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,386 Joined: Dec 2007 Member No: 598,878 |
I love the half flash / css/ html comcept, I hate it when an ENITIRE site is in flash it just pisses me off, but I love your portfolio, especially the contact button, thats neat and the colors/backgrounds:]
good job so far :] but on some bad notes, I found the navi hard to find, I didnt recognize it until after I tried to turn off the music, but I like everything else. I think you made it very effiecient with lightbox,;] |
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May 1 2008, 08:23 PM
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![]() s e c r e c y * ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 471 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 417,181 |
somewhat reminds me of 4impression.net lol.
I like it though. Love the setup. |
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May 1 2008, 09:31 PM
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![]() Padfoot ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,084 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,413 |
I don't have much to say. My thoughts have already been said but WICKED music.
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May 3 2008, 04:33 AM
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‹(. .)› ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 2,367 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,089 |
yes but you don't get that impression as soon as you open the site. it looked like a blog to me when i opened it. it doesn't say it's a portfolio for someone or anything like that. Although, I thought it looked a lot like a blog as well. I'm sure I wouldn't have if there was some sort of indication that it was a portfolio (other than having to read the "info"). ah i see. i guess the reason i got confused with your comments is because a lot of my favorite portfolio sites are in the form of blogs. nowadays, it seems more likely that a portfolio would include a blog than not. it could be because of the web 2.0 trend, but i'm just used to seeing portfolios within blogs or vice versa, therefore in my mind, they coexist ;o
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May 4 2008, 12:28 AM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 72 Joined: Apr 2008 Member No: 643,801 |
Nice work :)
I like the links at the top of the page. artsy.. nice :) again |
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