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post Jun 16 2004, 08:20 PM
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i didn't write this. i found it on a friend's xanga. hope it hasn't already been posted; if it has, i'll post something else..



boy_ I saw her today
girl_ I saw him today

boy_ It seems like its been forever
girl_ I wonder if he still cares

boy_ She looks better than before
girl_ I couldn't help staring at him

boy_ I asked her how things were going
girl_ I asked about his new girlfriend

boy_ I'd choose her over any girl I'm with
girl_ He's probably really happy now

boy_ I couldn't look at her without starting to cry
girl_ He couldn't even look at me

boy_ I told her I missed her
girl_ He doesn't miss me

boy_ I meant it
girl_ He didn't mean it

boy_ I love her
girl_ He loves his new girlfriend

boy_ I held her for the last time
girl_ He gave me a friendly hug

boy_ Then I went home and cried
girl_ Then I went home and cried

boy_ I lost her
girl_ I love him....
 
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post Jun 16 2004, 08:28 PM
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omigosh!!awwhss...*tear* x_x if only he felt that way....
 
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post Jun 17 2004, 12:44 PM
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Wow...that sounds so familiar. Ahh memories. pinch.gif
 
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post Jun 17 2004, 12:46 PM
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sad...
 
lozerface87
post Jun 19 2004, 02:56 PM
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...thats depressing
 
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post Jun 19 2004, 03:28 PM
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yep..imagine, things would be better if we told the truth and didn't let fears of rejection, etc. get in the way. ehh.. mellow.gif i should practice what i preach.
 
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post Jun 20 2004, 01:07 AM
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Waahhh brings back the memories. This depresses me. cry.gif
 
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post Jun 21 2004, 02:24 AM
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aaw man. that's a real thought provoker. can i write a song inspired by it?
 
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post Jun 21 2004, 03:02 AM
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QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jun 21 2004, 2:24 AM)
aaw man. that's a real thought provoker. can i write a song inspired by it?

sure. happy.gif i didn't write it; i lack the creativity to. i've read some of your poems in writing and wow..you're really skilled. i enjoy reading your writing, as well as kathleens. oh the envy...
 
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post Jun 21 2004, 02:54 PM
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What we have here is a failure to communicate!
 
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post Jun 25 2004, 02:11 AM
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awww i read dis one before.. =/ i got teary-eyed xP it`s so sweet tho..
 

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