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 Mar 31 2008, 01:44 PM
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Pink skin
calloused hands loving eyes, loving anyone but your wife what's the plan? for when you let me go wave goodbye or just not tell me so? Oh i.. ---I'm so tired of lovers running away. Oh i... ---I'm so sick of the fear I know that you'll walk away Walk away from me Walk away from me ----- so long, so gone. I've been left, call it... the theft of my heart. All those lovers who left ----They ran off with a piece of my heart. Call it the theft of my heart. And all, those lovers, who left, They swept away a piece of my heart. So tremble now; I can't get over it. Could you survive this much hurt with a smile, could you? You all let me down ----Can't you love me ----For more than a day? Can't you see me in more than one way? Do you know how badly it damages,the frail one who manages to keep the eyes in her gaze? The theft of my heart ----has left me in ache. |
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Mar 31 2008, 01:46 PM
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Custom Member Title Group: Member Posts: 655 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 619,464 |
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Mar 31 2008, 01:49 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
nice criticism.
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Mar 31 2008, 02:33 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 5,166 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,858 |
itt cuute..
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Mar 31 2008, 06:54 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
in what way?
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Mar 31 2008, 07:04 PM
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 chinky Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,566 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 434,437 |
So what's the title have to do with the poem?
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Mar 31 2008, 07:46 PM
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prostitution?
in her space holiday - japanese gum 'I used to know this girl Who gave her love away To every guy she met With all the games they played She never seemed to cry She never got upset And one by one they came And one by one they left' and 'It's not like I'm a slut Or that I really like to f**k I just want every boy I see To walk away with part of me Until there's nothing left to hold Until there's nothing left to hate I appreciate your help But even you can't save me from myself' |
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Mar 31 2008, 08:30 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
the answer should be apparent in the first lines..
"loving eyes, loving anyone but your wife" prostitution is one way of looking at it. then there's the notion of just plain being in love with a married man and FEELING like a prostitute.. |
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Apr 1 2008, 02:30 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Hmm, could it just be that this girl has had multiple lovers? Not in a prostitute like way? or slut-like way. I don't know, it's not typical for girls to get played or vice versa. Not a nice world we live in. Very nice by the way.
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Apr 1 2008, 11:10 AM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 5,166 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,858 |
gtfooo mee face..
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Apr 1 2008, 01:48 PM
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Custom Member Title Group: Member Posts: 655 Joined: Feb 2008 Member No: 619,464 |
enjoy the silence nquocasubwoofer
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Apr 1 2008, 02:17 PM
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Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 5,166 Joined: Oct 2007 Member No: 585,858 |
ye withh u MOM...
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