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how is it?
RissyMel
post Mar 18 2008, 06:18 PM
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It's a sing for my layout site.
I use GIMP, and just started like, last week.
any suggestions?
The text behind the people was done quickly, excuest the mess.

EDIT-


I blurred the words in the back a bit.
Is that better?
 
karmakiller
post Mar 18 2008, 06:24 PM
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Moved to the Showcase Forum thumbsup.gif

The text all over really bothers me for some reason.
 
emberfly
post Mar 18 2008, 11:59 PM
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QUOTE(karmakiller @ Mar 18 2008, 05:24 PM) *
Moved to the Showcase Forum thumbsup.gif

The text all over really bothers me for some reason.


^ agreed. The text is too sharp and visible. (I am referring to the repeated "broken record" text that is behind the band, not the big text in white.) If you made the text in the back blend in more, instead of being so sharp, I think it would be totally ace.


oh, by the way, great job. That looks really hard to do ^^.
 
RissyMel
post Mar 19 2008, 03:04 PM
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thanks!


that's the editted one.
I blurred the text in the back a bit.
anymore suggestings?
 
vintage-toile
post Mar 19 2008, 03:38 PM
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the opacity of the pattern [lines?] needs to be slightly less than it is now as they are a bit too sharp.
other than that this is great biggrin.gif
 
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post Mar 19 2008, 03:48 PM
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Third attemp.
^.^
 
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post Mar 19 2008, 03:50 PM
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definitely better. you've taken all of the advice in the replies and used it well >.< nice one!
 
RissyMel
post Mar 19 2008, 04:00 PM
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thankss.
awh man, I just realized, one Ryan's right sholder. I erased too much.
>.<
 
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post Mar 19 2008, 04:08 PM
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clone tool for the win.
or just cutting that piece out from the original image..
still. its good.
 
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post Apr 1 2008, 04:04 PM
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I like the third attempt the best! You are good at that! What do you use to do that? Photoshop right?
 
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post Apr 1 2008, 04:07 PM
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after much editing, lol, i'd say the third attempt looks great!
lol. happy.gif
 
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post Apr 1 2008, 04:57 PM
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I used GIMP
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post Apr 5 2008, 08:58 PM
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the third one is great; i just wish the stripes were behind the people, so that you could see them clearly and then have the awesome background. greatjob
 

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