that night, what do you think of this poem? |
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 Jul 9 2004, 01:04 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3  Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215  |
give me some feedback guys!
 here I lay up on my bed.. thinking of.. that night. that moment lasted forever the kiss of his lips the warmth of his hug the love in our hearts, that night. there we sat side by side hovering above us were the enchanting stars, with his hand in mine, we watched his words, our love, that night. so, here I lay up on my bed.. thinking of.. that night |
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Jul 9 2004, 02:01 PM
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Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
C'MON AND POST GOD DAMMIT! lol.. only joking.
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Jul 9 2004, 03:16 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
o wow its really goood nd i mean it. is it for who i think it is?
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Jul 10 2004, 08:08 PM
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 off the wall dork Group: Member Posts: 470 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,070 |
wow good poem.... its so simple that its really sweet. awesome
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Jul 10 2004, 08:16 PM
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 Pimp Status Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,200 |
Thats a tight poem...It kinda reminds me of the Dashboard Confessional Song Hands Down...Great poem you got there
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Jul 11 2004, 12:23 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,508 |
it's a sweet poem. reminds me of my past times with someone special.
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