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Poems by me, =]
AimeeLynn
post Oct 12 2007, 06:48 PM
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Silly love poems
Read them.

You don't mean nothing to me,
You see that it's clear,
I know that is what you see,
I know that's what I hear,
I know am not really into you,
but all these things....I wish was true.
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Nobody hears what I truly hear,
Things I've seen.
The story in my heart,
But all you have been doing is watching me fall apart,
I tend to seem I'm not paying attention,
but really I was looking for your contention,
I wish I was the one for you,
But you see that it's not true,
Things you heard all were right,
Today I cry silently at night,
Thinking I'm stupid and what I've done,
Everything happening like a rerun,
I wish you hadn't mistook,
I wish it ended like a fairy tale book.

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I don't know how i feel,
you make me confused,
stop being sarcastic for once,
and start being real,
Real about me,
You know what I mean,
You say something else,
I don't know what you say,
say to me is real or ok,
Please say something to make me feel right,
Say something to me as you hold me tight,
tight in your arms,
never let go,
how much you really cared,
I would never know.
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I want you back,
that's all I can say,
I can't believe I had done that,
I wish you hadn't gone away,
you know I love you,
for that I know is true,
I want you back,
back with me,
You and me are perfect can't you see,
I was confused not you,
please let us start a brand new,
Why had I let you go I would never know,
please come back and never let me go.

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Why had you left,
you know I had loved you,
the things you had said,
the things that you do,
you had made me smile,
You made me believe in things that were worth while,
stay with me,
can't you see,
why don't you understand,
I was stupid,
now I feel so helpless and useless,
come back to me,
there is still time,
And you and i both know you are always on my mind.
 
LoveToMySilas
post Nov 13 2007, 09:36 PM
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These poems are so short and cute. This one is my favorite, it reaches out to me most:

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I don't know how i feel,
you make me confused,
stop being sarcastic for once,
and start being real,
Real about me,
You know what I mean,
You say something else,
I don't know what you say,
say to me is real or ok,
Please say something to make me feel right,
Say something to me as you hold me tight,
tight in your arms,
never let go,
how much you really cared,
I would never know.
 
AimeeLynn
post Jan 2 2008, 07:18 PM
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Aww thanks =]
 
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post Jan 2 2008, 07:19 PM
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^welcome back
 
AimeeLynn
post Jan 2 2008, 07:23 PM
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Lol thanks yeah I've been out for awhile...but hey I'm back =]
 
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post Jan 7 2008, 04:48 PM
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thank you so much for sharing. i really enjoyed reading them!
 
jaeman
post Jan 10 2008, 06:14 AM
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Short and to-the-point. I like them, it really gets your mind going and the reader gets a sense of what's happening in the writer's life.
 
AimeeLynn
post Jan 20 2008, 08:36 PM
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thanks =]
 

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