two of my poems |
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 Nov 12 2007, 10:09 PM
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here they are...basically about me struggling with the fact Im gay and having an 18 year old boyfriend
 The price of love Something as beautiful as love Has to have a price For me that price is filth Words do not suffice I always feel dirty Like garbage of the street As much as I can struggle the ends never meet the dirty feeling clings to me it never goes away I feel that I’m not worthy And I’ll feel this till the end of my days Being gay is one thing Pedophilism is another Why must it be so hard to love one another? THAT IS THE PRICE OF LOVE this ones about how all my friends are older than me and they protect me but next year the'll all be gone  Huddled in a corner Of a small dark room Crying to myself saying I hope they’ll accept me soon A year goes by The colors fly Time has changed but nothing The blackness grows The heartache slows They don’t treat me like a someone but a something There were some friends They protected me I love them deeply For they can truly see But alas as all great things Soon they will depart In about a year I’ll be alone again I’ll be back at the start. |
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Nov 12 2007, 10:27 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
ermmm how old are you then?
and nice honest 'poetry' btw. i'd just relax. i dno why i'm getting that vibe but for some reason i just want to tell you that. relax. |
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Nov 13 2007, 03:13 PM
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QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Nov 12 2007, 10:27 PM)  ermmm how old are you then? and nice honest 'poetry' btw. i'd just relax. i dno why i'm getting that vibe but for some reason i just want to tell you that. relax. why the apostraphies around poetry?... |
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Nov 13 2007, 06:55 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
because i've been redefining poetry to myself lately. i dno. sorrry if it offended.
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Nov 15 2007, 01:24 PM
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no its fine
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Nov 16 2007, 07:39 PM
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You're like, a junior then, right, or are going to be?
I like your use of words. I can't really put it in any other way. It's sad, in a nice way. |
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Nov 17 2007, 09:42 AM
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Oh...um actually Im 13
which is kinda ****ed up when you think about it...
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Nov 26 2007, 06:46 PM
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Anyone like...Im actually just kinda bumping...lol im evil
 
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