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untitled poem
barbieeedollxo
post Oct 24 2007, 12:47 PM
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so many dark days with losses so great,
i thought for that my heart would surely break,
and then i met you...

we danced very slowly to a tune we'd not known,
to kindness and caring no others had shown,
thank the lord i found you...

time passed so quickly, each day was well spent,
learning new steps together with each letter sent,
and then i knew you...

the hours we spent finding deep in our souls,
a love that was shared began filling the holes,
and then i wanted you...

the day our eyes met and our hands both reached out,
we held onto each other without any doubt,
and then i loved you...


should i leave it untiltled or what should i name it?
and is it any good?
 

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