Unfinished poem. READ READ!, Not finished-but give me some feedback! |
 Jul 12 2004, 10:17 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 194  |
What’s taunted in existence
Can only hold the truth of an ashamed reflection. A careless state of mind controls the ruins of destiny, Directions which are misleading, lead to a path of disgrace and dissatisfaction. When darkness is the only forecast There’s no use believing things will be bright again. The silver lining brings us down. Down to a painful red, which despises true redemption. Bleeding is the eye of the beholder. Covered in pain her life now lives- Going back is a wish that can’t be granted. Somehow recovery isn’t as easy as being who you are. --should I finish it?? |
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Jul 13 2004, 12:00 AM
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 Wendy Clear Group: Member Posts: 51 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,961 |
That was awesome. finish!!!
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