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 Sep 21 2007, 05:57 PM
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 I fell for all the best deceptions  Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 564,318  |
 any suggestions? |
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Sep 21 2007, 05:59 PM
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 I'm Jc Group: Mentor Posts: 13,619 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 437,556 |
i think the navigation should be arranged differently, like the word message being by the word comments because they are both long words compared to the rest
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Sep 21 2007, 06:02 PM
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I fell for all the best deceptions Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: Aug 2007 Member No: 564,318 |
yeah.. i see what u are saying. i agree. anything else? the space background reminded me of the song... chemicals react... an explosion.. get it? or is it too random?
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Sep 21 2007, 06:29 PM
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 stop staring >_> Group: Member Posts: 497 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 455,389 |
At first i thought the picture was interlaced, but i waited awhile and it didnt focus up so im guessing it's suppose to be blurry?
Somehow i hate those swirly on the right and the title could've done in a more creative way. |
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Sep 21 2007, 07:50 PM
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 tell me more. Group: Official Member Posts: 2,798 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 35,640 |
I like it! The picture you used is nice.
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Sep 21 2007, 07:55 PM
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 Newbie Group: Member Posts: 2 Joined: Sep 2007 Member No: 575,416 |
That's pretty awesome.
But you should put the longest words first then to the smallest. Just a suggestion(: |
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Sep 23 2007, 03:42 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 125 Joined: Jul 2007 Member No: 552,336 |
nice. really like the picture and the background.
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Sep 23 2007, 06:24 PM
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 sang loves hayden. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,373 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,687 |
It's nice. I really like Aly & AJ cut outs. I'm not a fan of swirlies at all. The swirly that is on the bottom left corner seems like the brush is not suppose to be there because it gets cut off on the top. I think that it could've been creative with the title as well.
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Sep 23 2007, 06:36 PM
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 for SHIZZ. Group: Member Posts: 878 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 435,846 |
I don't like the swirls. But it's not bad.
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Sep 23 2007, 06:38 PM
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 here, here, and here Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,301 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 206,103 |
I like the photo of aly and aj...it's just that it seems "out of place"... such as it's bright and the background seems not as bright...if you get my drift. I think the title could have been more creative and I really don't enjoy swirlies either =/
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| *alovesopure* |
Sep 23 2007, 10:02 PM
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Get rid of the swirl brushes, and it would be better.
 I also don't like the "about me", "comment" "stats" text, get rid of those, and it wont be so busy looking. Other than that, it looks pretty good. |
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| *SinfullySweet* |
Sep 24 2007, 12:40 AM
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It looks nice. But it seems.. a little crowded, and very busy. I actually agree with everyone else, the layout as a whole would look much cleaner if there weren't any swirl brushes. The images would look much better if they were a tad smaller, her head slightly cuts off at in the top. Your navigation could be much better, that also goes for the comment box. Your navigation could have been placed horizontally across the top of the content area, to make it seem less crowded. Remember, you dont want to overdue the layout, so that it is overwhelming. Try to incorpirate these elements into your next layout!
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Sep 24 2007, 04:43 AM
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 </Hayley> Group: Member Posts: 128 Joined: Nov 2006 Member No: 481,581 |
I'm not a fan of the 'Swirlies' either.
I think that they would look better if they weren't at the very edge of the image. Because when it's made into a layout it's sorta 'cut off'. Hard to explain but i think some one will know what i mean =] |
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Sep 24 2007, 12:33 PM
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 Addict Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 3,918 Joined: Jun 2007 Member No: 538,522 |
You could use some effects on the main picture; blend it in a bit more with the background. The same again for the text.
You just need to do a bit more work on this yet, but overall the concept is very nice. |
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